I think everything published was very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you added a little information? I ain’t suggesting your information isn’t solid., but what
if you added something to possibly grab people’s attention? I mean How to Write Better Essays:
6 Practical Tips is a little plain. You might peek at Yahoo’s
home page and watch how they create news titles to get viewers to click.
You might try adding a video or a pic or two to grab people
excited about what you’ve written. In my opinion, it might make your website
a little bit more interesting.
Ensure that you have correctly referenced all quotations and completed a bibliography according to the stylistic requirements to which you have been asked to adhere. Your bibliography is very important as evidence of your research and wider reading, and to demonstrate that you recognise the importance of acknowledging sources. A bibliography should never be a rushed, last-minute task, but rather should evolve naturally, as your research does. As previously stated, noting full publication details of every book you consult at the time will help enormously with this.